Lone Adult on Tour

NaPoWriMo Brief 27: write a poem in the form of a review. – I couldn’t resist basing it on my favourite review ever.

Softplay is noisy
Echoey and crowded
The seats are plastic
And the drinks are average
I could forgive all that
But it is full of children
Some of them crying.
Which is fair enough
If you’re into all that
But avoid avoid avoid
If you’re a lone adult.

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